How to write an unemployment letter for NYS Department of Labor appeal hearing
I'm completely lost on how to write an unemployment letter for my upcoming NYS Department of Labor appeal hearing. My claim was denied because they said I quit voluntarily, but I was actually forced to resign due to unsafe working conditions at my warehouse job. The hearing is scheduled for next month and I need to submit a written statement explaining my side. Has anyone here written one of these letters before? What should I include to make sure the administrative law judge understands that I had good cause to leave? I'm worried about messing this up since I really need these benefits.
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Amara Nnamani
Yes, you'll want to be very specific in your letter about the unsafe conditions. Document dates, incidents, any complaints you made to management, and witnesses if possible. The key is proving you had 'compelling reasons' to leave under NYS Department of Labor guidelines. Include any photos, emails, or safety violations you reported. Make it chronological and stick to facts rather than emotions.
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Liam Fitzgerald
•Thank you! I do have some text messages between me and my supervisor about the broken safety equipment. Should I include those as attachments?
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Giovanni Mancini
I had to write one of these last year for my adjudication appeal. Keep it professional but detailed. Start with your employment dates, then explain the specific unsafe conditions that forced you to quit. The NYS Department of Labor wants to see that you tried to resolve the situation before leaving. Include any documentation of complaints you made to HR or OSHA.
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NebulaNinja
•did they accept your appeal? my hearing is coming up too and im nervous about the whole process
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Fatima Al-Suwaidi
If you're having trouble getting through to NYS Department of Labor for guidance on this, I recently discovered claimyr.com which helped me reach an actual agent. They have a video demo at https://youtu.be/qyftW-mnTNI showing how it works. I was stuck for weeks trying to get clarification on my appeal requirements and this service got me connected within a day to someone who could review my situation.
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Liam Fitzgerald
•Thanks, I'll check that out. I've been calling for weeks with no luck getting through to anyone who can help with appeal procedures.
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Dylan Mitchell
ugh the whole appeal process is such a nightmare... I went through this 2 years ago when they said I was fired for misconduct but really my boss was just covering up his own mistakes. Make sure you address every single point they made in their denial letter or they'll use it against you at the hearing!!!
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Sofia Morales
Format wise keep it business letter style with your name, claim number, and hearing date at the top. Then write Dear Administrative Law Judge, explain your situation clearly, and end with Sincerely. The NYS Department of Labor website has some sample formats if you search for appeal letter templates.
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Dmitry Popov
•Yeah I found those templates super helpful when I had to write mine
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Dmitry Petrov
I went through this exact same situation last year - warehouse job, unsafe conditions, forced resignation. The key thing that helped me win my appeal was being super specific about how the unsafe conditions violated OSHA standards. I listed every incident with dates, described exactly what safety equipment was broken or missing, and included photos I took on my phone. Also document any conversations where you brought up safety concerns to supervisors. The judge wants to see you made reasonable attempts to fix the situation before quitting. Don't just say "unsafe conditions" - say things like "forklift had faulty brakes reported on [date], no safety harnesses provided for elevated work, blocked emergency exits, etc." Good luck!
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Zainab Omar
•This is really helpful advice! I'm dealing with a similar situation right now. How long did your appeal process take from start to finish? And did you need to get any witnesses to testify about the unsafe conditions, or was your documentation enough?
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Paolo Rizzo
I've been through this process twice - once successfully, once not. The difference was in the details. For your unsafe warehouse conditions case, you need to frame it around NYS Labor Law standards. Mention specific violations like inadequate ventilation, broken machinery without lockout/tagout procedures, missing safety guards, or violations of warehouse height safety requirements. The administrative law judge needs to see that a reasonable person in your situation would have quit. Also, if you filed any workers' comp claims or incident reports while employed, definitely include those. One thing I learned the hard way - if you have any medical documentation showing stress or injury from the unsafe conditions, include that too. The NYS Department of Labor considers both physical safety and health impacts when determining "good cause" for leaving. Keep the letter under 2 pages but make every sentence count.
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